Solid 2.5 stars...not much depth...hot but a little dark also...need some more background to feel the intimacy. Wish this was full length and not so vague but it is a short story but I do suggest it be turned into a full length story with character development surrounding both characters and they would be more likeable. Going to read second since it's real short and it left a cliffhanger and I just want to see if both of them have 'saved' each other. I do not know why I continue to keep reading erotica short stories. I hate every one of them. Without the time to do any character development, it just ends up reading like a really cheap porno story with zero romance. This one, unfortunately, is no exception. I'm very glad it was free and that it was a quick read. She was underage. She was a virgin. He is gay! And that reference to hemmies...well. That is GROSS.
Hated the Jordie character and wished for more story development
—birdie
Fast paced, lusty story about a scared girl and a rock star.
—Roxana
Free Kindle book. Dirty and kind of creepy. Didn't like it.
—emb423
Kindle Edition.
—silash
