Quick short read with likeable characters and nice build up of sexual tension. Lost two stars for a few reasons, firstly the editing which needs tightening up, spelling errors and punctuation in totally the wrong places. Also the author could have put in a little more effort and made this into a ...
Solid 2.5 stars...not much depth...hot but a little dark also...need some more background to feel the intimacy. Wish this was full length and not so vague but it is a short story but I do suggest it be turned into a full length story with character development surrounding both characters and they...