This is a perfect example of why I don't choose to read short stories. This story was just way too short. It ended up feeling more like a long commercial for Biore--which was name dropped WAY too many times for how short this story was. If all that could have been minimized, though, and the story turned into a novel, it may have been more successful.Thankfully, I got this for free on Amazon, so at least I didn't waste any money on it. Before book starts girl finds boyfriend in bed with her best friend. Both are ex's now. Girl's best friend steals her Biore cream (Weird I thought, since it went through the whole book).Girl has little dog. Big dog attacks little dog. Guy comes and gets big dog which is his grandma's. Guy takes little dog and girl back to his grandma's house. Little dog isn't hurt too bad. Girl starts to fall for guy. Girl goes looking for guy in the grandma's house and finds grandma dead. Girl gets mad at guy. Guy explains. Guy and girl date. The End! Thats the whole book!! Really stupid book... Read in about 20 minutes.
it was okay. it is a really short story and the character seemed to be way fixated Biore products.
—peter
Too short, too weird, too many plugs for Biore.
—Vrel
It was great for a FREE short story!
—Lexi
this was a great little story
—amullin
