My thoughts on this novella:Characters: 3.5I am not sure how I truly feel about this pair. Jaike is very introverted and dating a "safe" guy. Derek wants her ever since the first time they meet and he felt that she was the "sub" for him. Jaike did not really pull me in like she should have as a main character and Derek got on my nerves just a little with his "I am Dom" hear me roar behavior.Plot: 3Not much of one. Young man wants girl that he feels is submissive and will work as a sub for him. Girl is afraid of feelings and rejects his advances.Flow: 4I was not jarred out of the story and everything was in order and easy enough to follow.Believability: 3.5Some of Derek's behavior was stalkerish, at least in my opinion. If I was Jaike, I would run too.Sexual Tension: 4Jaike was hyper-aware of Derek and those scenes, where some of the simplest gestures and actions happened, took on a new dimension because of it.Romance: 3.5I felt there was more "lust" than love in this story, especially on Derek's part, though Jaike did have some attraction to him that she was afraid to admit to.Elements-M/F-Light BDSM elements (Dom/Sub) Marian Tee is usually a winning bet for me. An author I like and whose books had never disappointed me before this one. But this one? This is not a book with a cliffhanger, this feels more like a chapter of a book. A chapter in which a lot of things seem to happen in just one scene, but which leave us knowing what it feels too much and too little about the main characters. That had to be difficult to manage, but the author did it. DISSAPOINTED!
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a great teaser and can't wait until it's fully out! beats fifty shades by far!
—Asirual
