Very short. Didn't realise it was going to be this short - 22 pages. The writing when it started off wasn't very good but it did improve and I do feel that the bones were there for a longer more developed story to be written. Saying that for a short story I think it did do the job it set out to do. It was light, slightly comedic, mildly sexy but could have done better. Worth reading if you fancy a very quick delve into fantasy land, but I would have liked to have seen the story developed more - it had definite promise. But for a free read you can't really complain. If there is such a thing as a comedy about hell, this is it. Somehow the whole idea of having a new guy, Anarchy, take over from the Devil (there is a great explanation for this in the story) struck me as really funny. It also makes Anarchy more "human" as he goes through finding Josh kneeling in front of him, awaiting his sentence, then being curious about what the young man is doing in hell. Of course, the sex he ends up having with Josh is appropriately D/s, but the feelings the characters develop for each other are a nice surprise.If you like your stories to be a little tongue-in-cheek, if you enjoy bad boys, and if you're looking for a very hot read that will probably make you smile as well, then you might enjoy this short free story.
Do You like book Welcome To The Dark Side (2013)?
This one's easy. A short and surprisingly sweet read.
—fenza3
I totally loved this one!!! Soooo damn sexy!!!
—KarleeLindfors
I wish there was more background and story.
—dalton
