When this came up on the freebie list I had to give it a go as I have enjoyed others she has written.The rating I have given is not indicative of the standard of writing which was excellent. Or really of the plot which felt truncated because of the short format. Although I felt i gave no room for development of motives which on Kane's part seemed woefully absent.What really got my knickers in a twist was the premise of non-consensual or dubious consent sex being portrayed as desirable. I am quite willing to believe that was not actual the case but the short format gave no room to develop that aspect, and I was left feeling disturbed. Loved it! The only thing that could have made it better was making it longer. This is an extremely short story, but for some reason, I felt connected to Clara and Kane. They were so believable. I want to know more!As for Ms. Gray… wow! Why have I not heard of this author before?! Her writing is off the hook. Even though this is an erotic story, it is relatively tame. It'd be a nice intro for someone thinking about dipping their toes in this genre.The reason for the lower grade is simply due to the length. There is so much potential here. But overall I'm very happy… and I have a new author to look into! I highly recommend this short to fans of erotic romances or those looking to try the genre out. At only about 30 pages and free, what do you have to lose?
Wasn't bad will continue with the rest of the naughty nooners. Since they are FREE!
—NeonRain
I deducted a star because the story was too close to a rape scenerio.
—FrankieLovesMCR
Exciting!! Enjoyed this emensly.
—vicar
Good but way too short.
—Shanoo
