I'm glad this was a free download. I wasn't into this story at all. The editing left a lot to be desired. I wasn't a huge fan of Louise. I felt no connection to any of the characters. At first I felt she was just a nice person who didn't want to hurt anyone's feelings. I really don't like the person Louise is/was. The more I read about Ben and learned about his character the more I wanted to slap him. I wasn't a fan of his 2 brothers either. This was just not a story for me. This story was just ok. I couldn't get over how easy Louise was duped!!! Yes I'm saying it why would go along with being in a relationship with a man you can't even stand? Let alone agree to meet his family for a weekend?? Ben was such a whiner oh jeez he actually left her at the movies and took off!! I get it the attraction for the other brothers David and Richard when Ben was suck a bore, but come on Louise have some self respect!! Richard was a prick at least show a bit of tact!! I guess being mega rich means you don't even know how to lock a door people just barge in all the time!! I gave the story 3 stars because the way Louise, Ben and Richard behaved made laugh- yes that's how messed up they are!
Not liking the main characters but it was so short than I went right into book 2.
—arellano01
I was only mad that it was 3 Chapters long. but really good
—julia_ava
read the whole series in one go! thought it was great !
—STARFISH1
