3 stars for the story, 2 stars for the execution, 1 star for EDITING.Oh my word the typos, wrong names, jumps in POV, etc etc. All I can say is wow hire an editor, or a beta reader or even, maybe, hell just read it closely one more time yourself before you PUBLISH! Just sayin'. So, nice story line but you have to bear with the clunky sentences and the fact that, yes, one of their names was in nearly every freaking sentence! Settling on 2 stars for this one, I did finish, but it was a near thing. For me this one is more a 2 star read than a 3, but I'm kind of intrigued by the male preg idea at the moment.As someone already said, the whole plot revolves around the idea that the two of them never actually have a conversation. It was alright up to a point, but then suddenly you're at two thirds of the book and they are still not talking. It was very weak as plot goes, and no matter how much I liked Demyan he just wasn't strong enough character to hold the whole thing afloat. Still he was what I like the most about it. Probably the biggest flaw is the fact that every single interesting thing that could have made this book special was skimmed over, while all those repetitive situations were completely worked through. If you are looking for the same thing as I was when I picked it up (male preg) you will be disappointed, as it is only just mentioned without any explanations. But if you're a Glenn fan and don't have a problem with a pregnant ending - go for it. It's not much different than usual Stormy Glenn work.
Do You like book The Katzman's Mate (2009)?
Broke my heart in a few places, lack of communication can be a b*tch!
—Bookworm123
This was just a really sweet little story.
—thompl
