I'm not sure what the other reviewers were reading as I did not see a grammar issue within the pages. I minoredin English so I am fairly certain I would have caught something. A professional editor is always welcome, but againnothing strikes as poorly written. That being said I loved the two main characters and the brief D/s and BDSM style contractthat they get into. I liked the note at the end that stated this was a work of fiction and to not use it as a guide foryour own sub relationship. The sex scenes were hot and nicely done and I like the build up to the relationship. Looking forwardto reading the next in the series! Great story by Tonya! DNFThe writing was awkward and the book completely glossed over the two main characters getting to know each other. They meet and then the book fast forwards and we're told that Nick and Sondra had been spending all of this time together.The book was also cheesy. Does anyone really put things on pause so they can light candles and put on soft music? And then Sondra asked Nick if he wanted her to whip out some massage oil. What other clichés were going to be thrown on us?
Sweet and tutorial in nature for those curious about D/s.
—Kim
Good but not as good as Fifty Shades of Grey
—Brittany
Erotica only!! No story just sex!!!
—Kat
Interesting good writing.
—daishailarraza
