This book was so much better than the first one - there was more depth to it. I liked Payton's character so much better - she was a stronger character and I related to her way more. There was some cheesy parts to the book and I did find some of the writing a little immature. The sex was so much hotter also - Jack was hot and intense so I liked Payton and Jack together. I am looking forward to Cade and Evan's story and I hope the writing has matured a bit when their book comes out. Wow, im always amazed when I sit down to read a book that gets such amazing reviews only to find that who ever is writing these reviews must have some personal stake in it's success. This was absolutely awful. At best, it was a rough idea of what could have been a decent book, at worst it was a few (a very, very few) meaningless scenes between bouts of raunchy sex. Essentially, this book is literary porn and not even good literary porn.The dialog is stilted, the characters are so one dimensional, the narrative is non-existent. The entire thing felt like i was listening to an airheaded valley girl tell me story while she was drunk. Nothing had any depth and the attempt to add it in by simply giving the main characters some past life trauma did nothing help. Especially the effects of a past rape on a young girl. It was almost insulting in that the author simply took a cookie cutout of what one possible effect could have been and used it to try and make her character sympathetic without ever really going any deeper into why that happened. You don't get any real feeling for the psychological toll this event and the years of keeping it a secret have really been like for this girl beyond the stereotyped behavior of promiscuity. When dealing with this kind of subject matter, especially making such a central point in your story, it's really very irresponsible and disrespectful to those who have actually survived a sexual assault to write about it without any apparent care to the complexity of such an event.As i said before, the bare bones of this story held potential, but unfortunately for me, and i would think anyone looking for more than just another couple of scenarios to add to the spank bank, it failed completely to carry it off in any way.
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This book flowed much much better than the first one. I will definitely read book three.
—bryanna
Alpha hotness!!! Love this series and book 3 already sounds promising
—Rick
OH can't wait to read Evan's story with Cade!!!!!!
—megznichole18
