Shadow of the Vampire by Meagan Hatfield was a book that made both a positive and a negative impression on me. Parts of the book were very well-written, and other parts were cliche-ridden.The main male character, the hero, is a dragon-man, a shapeshifter. I'll admit to a fascination with dragons that started in my early teen years with the first Pern book I ever read (though these dragons' resemblance to Pern dragons ends with the word dragon). Declan is a strong figure, physically attractive, and head of the dragon clan after his parents' deaths. He's full of angst over their manner of death and his unexpected ascendance as head of the clan.Alexia is a 125 year old vampire, daughter of the current Queen, and heir-apparent. In some places, she's smarter than she appears to be, and in others, she's just dumb as a rock. I don't really understand why she puts up with Lotharus at all, except to appease her mother, whose "lover" he is. I wouldn't put up with that for MY mother....There's a feud between dragons and vampires, a la Underworld's vampire/lycan struggle, and the background for this feud is scattered about in little bits and pieces, with not much organization. Ultimately, all I really understand is that the vampires hate the dragons and vice versa, with no real inkling as to why exactly this is so. Maybe there's a previous book or story I missed reading before this one.The villain of the piece, Lotharus, is easy for me to hate, as he is abusive (verbally, physically, sexually) and a bigot. His secret plot to take over the vampire clan is threaded throughout the story, until the denouement decides his fate once and for all.Alexia's mother, the Queen of the vampire clan, is mostly an afterthought tucked into chapters here and there, though she does play a major role in the climactic fight for "survival" of the clan.The chemistry between Alexia and Declan fairly crackles, and this is a part of the book with which I'm pleased. Their growing care for each other, and the internal struggles each experiences, create obstacles with which most of us can identify from our own romantic hobgoblin-strewn past.The most obvious place for my displeasure in this book is one single word: conscious. In no less than six places, this word is incorrectly used instead of conscience. As the daughter of an English teacher, I tend to see mistakes like this in blinking neon letters, and it not only irritates me that a mistake of this kind passed the editing process, but also these mistakes tend to take me out of the story in a highly abrupt manner. Thus does even an otherwise nearly perfect book lose a star, or even two, in my own personal rating system (not that this one was nearly perfect). No, I do not use the English language perfectly, though I do try to keep my errors in the spoken arena of use, rather than the written. I have high expectations of a published work, and this one falls down on the job. Conscious and conscience just aren't interchangeable in the English language, and the repetition of the mistake really chapped my hide.Fight scenes are an obvious part of the plot, both between the dragons and the vampires, and internally amongst the vampire sects. For the most part, the fight scenes are well-written, though sometimes they do spring up from practically nowhere. The private scenes with Declan and Alexia are probably the most engaging, and there are enough to keep the reader interested in finding out how this relationship resolves in the end.In this universe, dragons have powers, and sometimes those powers (such as telepathy) appear out of nowhere to move the overall arc forward, but in reality as a form of exposition. It's not overused, but often enough that I remember it.One of the biggest wtf's (and yes, I am aware that is not proper English, lol) in this book is an entire chapter dedicated to Declan's sister, Tallon, and her newfound attraction to lone wolf Griffon. Had it been interwoven into the book from the beginning, it might have worked. As written, though, one single chapter in the middle of nowhere, it stuck out like a sore thumb, and did nothing whatsoever to impact the plot in any way. It deserves its own story, not being stuffed into the middle of Declan's, particularly as this chapter shows Tallon and Griffon dancing around her sprung-out-of-nowhere attraction, and finally falling into a fairly hot love scene. Turn the page, and we're back to Declan and Alexia.Bottom line: I enjoyed parts of this book, but none of it was really memorable beyond reading, with the exception of the word conscious and the fact that the villain was an abuser. I remembered those two points! In order to write this review, I had to open the book a couple of dozen times to random pages and rescan to remember names or plot points. If you like dragons or vampires or feuds or paranormal in general, you might enjoy this book. If you read with a critical eye, you will probably not enjoy this book. Drangons, half vampire half drangons, vampires, vampires that can be killed by by a gun, fist fights, shoot outs, torture, dirty dungeons, blood and gutts, death, love, lies, self sacrafice, passion in odd places, sex sences (oh boy long sex sences), rampid emotion, loss.This book has it all and i loved it... it has none stop action, passion, all the good stuff. this is the first book i have read by meagan hatfield and i can tell you i wont be the last, she has done an amazing job with this book...alexia the main female charactor of the book was shy and brave as it was needed, she was raped, tortured, beatten and almost killed and saved a number of times in this book.declan the main male charator was brave and loyal to his kind was torture, beatten and almost killed a number of time throught the book.... are you seeing a pattern here.. OMG who saves who ??? lolthe bad guy lotharus is one you end up hating and dispising right from the word go.the suporting charactor are great as well youll far inlove with the good guys and hate the bad ones..meagan has written this book with such passion i find it touching...ok a quick run down of the book (i hate when people tell to much of the story in a review but im going to turn not to do that)declan is the king of the dragons and at the start of the book has set of to finish what his parents dies trying to do, find a magic crystal which is in the hand of the vampires, he gets catch by alexia and her horde(vampire army) and is tortured all most killed to try to get the location of the crystal he stoll. he meets alexia the next inline of the throne of the horde/vampires and that were things get complated for the 2, they fallin in love and save each onther a number of time... so basical this book is about find and destorying the crystal so noone has the power it can hold...the story in the book is awesome and as far as im conserned has no boring parts and i reconmend this book to anyone over the age of 18.. i just loved it..
Do You like book Shadow Of The Vampire (2010)?
I really enjoyed this story!! The dragon warriors and the vampires at war was awesome! :-)
—Tricia
I tried and got 3/4 of the way through but just could NOT get into this book!!!!!
—vk_003
Very good book, kept me reading! Can't wait for book two.
—elyse
