This was...OK.I probably would've rated it higher had the plot not seemed so, well, thin. And holey. And a bit ridiculous. More than once, when a question was answered or something was revealed, my face got that scrunched-up, skeptical look that means "well that's an...interesting...direction to take things." (That's what it means when I'm being extra-diplomatic, anyway.)In other words, without getting into spoiler territory, Miller made some odd choices - ones that I think hurt the story. The writing technique, though - the language itself - was well done.If you're after a torrid romance, you won't find it here. Any romantic themes are essentially an afterthought. (I don't consider that a bad thing, BTW. A light touch with the heat is often an improvement.)It wasn't terrible, and it's free, so I guess just see for yourself. I found this short story quite enjoyable. Right off the bat the reader is thrown into this world where magic is real and things may not always be as they appear. I felt the world building was strong and the story kept me quite engaged throughout. I grew to like the characters and the pace felt natural. Overall I would be pleased to see the story of the main characters continued and to learn more about this world as it feels like it has quite the potential.
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Nice story. I would like to see a sequel-- just to see Rafferty and Corin finally together. :3
—ryyoung
Great short! Loved the concept and the characters!
—cortica
