It's funny to read through some of the other comments and learn that things that made me like this story are what made others dislike it.So often the characters in romance stories live in mostly isolated worlds where the only outsiders who serve to bring in conflict. I enjoyed seeing Mark interact with his brother, sister-in-law and new friend Claire, while trying to decide if he can have a relationship with Seth or not.I loved that after learning of Mark's social anxiety problems Seth figured out ways for them to get to know each other without setting off a panic attack.I enjoyed this sweet story. This was a pretty good book. It involved a good looking guy who was smart and stable but very shy. He was crippling shy. He's also gay, and has huge issues dealing with other gay men he finds attractive. He's been accomplishing his sexual need in an unfulfilled manner at gay bars behind alleys and such. His younger brother is heading off to Afghanistan and his pregnant wife is experiencing complications. Enter Mark, he moves in with his sis in law to 'take care of her'. While there, he finds himself deeply attracted to Seth, a former dancer who now teaches Zumba at the local gym. He pretends to be his brother (the one in Afghanistan) in an attempt to not reveal much of himself to Seth due to his crippling shyness. He eventually starts corresponding with Seth via email, which leads to phone conversations and eventually physical contract. Over time, Mark's shyness slowly fades and his love for Seth, and surprisingly Seth's love for him slowly develops. I have to tell you that this was one of the slowest moving coming out stories. I truly enjoyed Seth's parts of the novel. He was such a good guy. He wasn't perfect even if people saw him as such. He went out of his way to make Mark comfortable with himself and with the growing attraction between him and Mark. I have to say, I have yet to meet so patient a guy. I really enjoyed their process, but wished it sped up a bit. I also wanted to know what happened with the brother who was stationed in Afghanistan. AND the other couple... I really hate unexplained endings. But, I was happy that Mark finally came to terms with himself. We can only wish that for ourselves and others.
Do You like book Moving In Rhythm (2012)?
Wanted it to be longer. I wasn't ready to leave Seth, Mark, Lisa, Clair, Pete, Freddie & Bella...
—Kettmake
It was a really good book but it felt like it ended half finished
—stephlou
