This is the first book/novella I have read by this author, and I am happy to say that now I have been introduced to her, I fully intend to read more of her books. This was a lovely story about how an arranged marriage where the bride was less than happy with the arrangement, turns into a marriage of love and passion. It was written beautifully, and even though the story is a novella, a lot actually happened. I thoroughly enjoyed it. This is a short story or novella or something. 688 Kindle positions. I only made it to the 39% mark.This needs an editor. BADLY. The points of view (many) are all over the place and make rocky shifts. Normally, I try to be forgiving of "head-hopping," but not here, as it's trying to either fit too much information into too few words or the author didn't know how to condense that information effectively. However, the "head-hopping" itself was clumsy. It could have been done in far better ways with a little care and attention. And an editor.Dear multi-published authors who are hopping on the self-pub bandwagon: If your editors throughout the years haven't been able to teach you to write by now, hire another when you go out on your own. This is disgraceful.
