This was a free book I came across and decided to give it a try. I don't usually go for strictly m/m books but I have often times read books containing m/f/m or m/m/f relationships. This was a short read and so considering that I guess it was pretty decent. I more or less got why their relationship was in trouble but by the end I wasn't clear on whether or not they knew where they were going from there. I believe Danny was saying that in their relationship he needed Vincent to be in control because there was too much chaos in his head and letting Vincent take over allowed his head to be quieted. But then it sounded like Vincent was saying that he didn't think he was ok hurting Danny and that Danny would need to let Vince know when he needed him to be in control but doesn't that defeat the purpose? And it sounded to me like Danny wanted Vince in control all the time. But then the book ended with Vince giving Danny a command so I'm left confused about how the relationship will move forward but if you don't look too closely at the details and just take the story at face value it was entertaining. This is a very short, short story (15 minutes to read). Thankfully the author didn't try to squeeze too much into the limited word count. Essentially the story covers a couple of hours in a failing relationship. These hours encompass a pivotal development in the relationship which will potentially keep the lovers happier & together. It would have been nice to read more about how their D/s relationship developed & whether they successfully re-negotiated their relationship for a HEA.Originally posted on Amazon.com
I liked the story very much, it just was a bit confusing to sort out who was talking when :)
—Diane
Heartwrenching and beautiful and about the hottest thing I've ever read.
—wollie
This is a gay erotic and very well written engaging story. Good read.
—Nick
Three stars. A good strong story.
—Safsz
4.5...mm-mm-good.
—kevans1
