I enjoyed this story. The banter was good between the characters and so was the tension. I did have a bit of trouble with the writing at the beginning of the story. It seemed a little stiff or stilted, but it smoothed out as the story went along.I enjoyed the Harry Potter references in regards to Fleury's name.The sex at the end was super hot! Heath definitely has a Dom personality and Fleury seemed to enjoy it. I wish the story was a HEA but looks like it's just a HFN story unless the author continues on with it at a later date. I think the teasing tone was one of my favorite aspects of this story. The whole “Fleury/Flower” taunt just made me crack a smile each and every time and the edging scenes were wonderfully wicked. I was also very impressed with Drew’s character. He was one helluva great friend – the kind that anyone would call themselves lucky to have! I laughed at the witty dialogue and innuendos – those that were spoken as well as those that were in thought only. A wonderful story and I really enjoyed it!!
3.5 out of 5A nice story, but the MCs are a little too good to be true.
—theheidss
Interesting story. Good writing. Hot details. Nice ending.
—schwur
Super cute! Loved all the Harry Potter references, too)
—fhggyydh
4.5* Cute:)
—Eesha
I loved it!
—mimigirl5d
