The concept is good, time travel and love. But the truth is that the book has very little about Q and love. He has this tendency to over describe scenes, like the mini golf game. Why the f*** do I need all those pointless details?! He never explains the obsession to give his characters gastritis ...
I love Kurt Vonnegut. Initially, I thought this book was going to be hopelessly derivative. The title is an obvious nod to KV. When the author first broke the fourth wall, it seemed gratuitous, without purpose, and thrown in just to be like Breakfast of Champions. He even openly named this in...