This one is seriously just a teaser. It seems to be only part of one chapter. I liked the story line and the plot but there are no "good parts" to this sample. The author is somewhat pretentious in that she places a bold statement "review after you finish reading this book". Well I wouldn't call it a book and I am surprised that they wasted the cover art on it. Since this teaser is so short I am leery of purchasing the remaining parts of the story as I feel that I would end up paying a large amount of cash for pieces. Although it rips of Fifty Shades of Grey title it's a very different book. It's badly written. The characters are flat and the plot underdeveloped.The school plot cycle could been expanded better. Also missing are spanking scenes, the main character receives a grand total of 3 swats across the whole book.And in a final rip-off of EL James book it establishes the ideas that BDSM is a perversion, something unhealthy, to be ashamed of. The male lead is a Dom simply because a past girlfriend said he was a bad lay on Facebook. He actually affirms that even if a sub thinks he's bad in the bedroom she would be too ashamed to be a submissive to tell anyone else about it.To top it all, the female lead ends up HEA in a Vanilla relationship, even as the book affirms that she's a natural sub and thrives under the crop. While I can see a sub suppressing her needs to be in a relationship with a Vanilla men, that is not what the last chapter message. The ending is that BDSM is evil, every Dom is a extremely jealous abuser that will beat you black-and-blue for having lunch with a male friend.I've given two stars due to the plot and characters development. The story in itself is a one star.
Do You like book Fifty Shades Of BDSM (2000)?
I gave this short story 3 stars because I liked it I wish I could read the rest of it
—matt
this is the first book I have read from Sky Corgan and I really liked it
—Nilcen
